kai ([info]kaiz) wrote,

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He never asks about your day, he never asks how you are feeling. He refuses to discuss the students or the war when in your quarters; 'idle chit-chat' has never been his way.

Instead, once you are alone, he will place a glass of something amber and smooth, tasting of peat in your hand. Or he will stand behind you, silently, one hand round your waist, the other releasing the pins in your hair, as his lips trace the curve of your nape. Sometimes, he will do both.

Always, and in any case, your heart beats faster for his attentions. The cold, thin blood in your veins heats and thickens, and while the black heat of his gaze is upon you, or his lips are murmuring your name, you can remember what it is to feel again.

He is an adept at the unspoken word. He can read every moment of your day in the set of your shoulders, the cadence of your heels against the flagstones, the frown or smile that you forget to hide. That he learned those skills as a child, dodging blows from his drunken father or bullies in the school-yards--that you played your own unwitting role in nurturing those talents--is tragic perhaps. But their application on your behalf, oh!

That he knows precisely when to cajole, or to snipe, or to step back and give you space, that he knows the exact pressure needed, of his fingers or lips, along your spine, the curve of your breast, your inner thigh that will coax forth a gasp or a sigh! Then, tragic or not, you will not deny his virtuosity.

You don't care that it is scandalous, that your colleagues *tsk-tsk* when your back is turned. You don't care that he's young enough to be your son. You don't care one whit that Albus disapproves.

The light and heat that you create together in the intimacy of your private quarters--whether in bed or over a chessboard or a bottle of Glenlivet after a long day--needs no witness or critic or judge.

And your own son is long dead now, as is your husband.

You are old, tired and he is young, burning with rage, passion, and lust. He is *here* wanting you, reminding you why tomorrow matters, proving that the world still holds things worth living--and not merely dying--for.

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[info]laurelwood

April 28 2004, 01:40:10 UTC 8 years ago

What a great first sentence- it sets the tone so perfectly.

I love the thought of him standing behind her, pulling the pins out of her hair. And this- "You don't care one whit that Albus disapproves"- the fact that Minerva's such a stickler for propriety and rules, yet does whatever the hell she likes in her free time, Albus be damned... lovely.

[info]kaiz

April 28 2004, 21:41:47 UTC 8 years ago

Thanks! It was just one of those little things that wants out sometimes. :-) I love the pairing trememdously...too bad it's so rare.

[info]ptyx

April 28 2004, 04:56:14 UTC 8 years ago

Beautiful...

[info]kaiz

April 28 2004, 21:42:23 UTC 8 years ago

{{{ptyx}}} Thank you!

[info]josanpq

April 28 2004, 17:23:29 UTC 8 years ago

This gives hope to us old dames!

[info]kaiz

April 28 2004, 21:43:05 UTC 8 years ago

Older women and young-ish men are a perfect combination!

[info]arsenicjade

April 28 2004, 20:59:20 UTC 8 years ago

i'm not even particularly in to this pairing and whoa. mmm, it's so nice to read something by you.

[info]kaiz

April 28 2004, 21:44:05 UTC 8 years ago

Thanks! I opened up a file and realized that sometime, a zillon years ago, I had written two sentences. Things just escalated from there! ;-0

[info]arsenicjade

April 29 2004, 20:02:55 UTC 8 years ago

thank divinity for old files, man

[info]musigneus

May 1 2004, 19:34:53 UTC 8 years ago

I wandered in via your recs page. I've liked Snape/McGonagall ever since I read Docet Minervam, so it's great to see another story featuring this pairing. Particularly such a good story!
I loved the way you used details I associate with Minerva (the bun, rigid posture, tapping heels, and sense of propriety) to create a sense of closeness between her and Snape. Lines like He can read every moment of your day in the set of your shoulders, the cadence of your heels against the flagstones... and You don't care one whit that Albus disapproves were just beautiful.

[info]kaiz

May 3 2004, 08:29:54 UTC 8 years ago

Welcome! :-)

Thanks so much for lovely feedback and the rec--it's a story I hadn't read before! New SS/MM, yay! :-)

[info]rrrosa

May 3 2004, 21:21:26 UTC 8 years ago

Is there anything you write that I won't read? Cannibalism. *Het*. Hee.

This was, as always, quiet and lovely. I'm very fond of Snape-McGonagall gen-ish stuff. This is the first het I've read of them. And now I'm off to read that story rec'd above.

Thank you!

[info]kaiz

May 3 2004, 21:46:19 UTC 8 years ago

Cannibalism mmmmmmmmmm! ;-)

Snape/McG is one of my fave pairings ever! I just love their interactions. I loved them before OotP and when that book came out, Wowza--the very end? When McG returns from the hospital? ::happy sigh::

If you can be a bit patient, there were will much Snape/McG gen goodness (with a smidge of Snape/Hooch gen and a huge heaping helping of Snape/Shacklebolt smut) in the not too distant future, when our fearless beta gives us (Josan and I) back our 'little monster.' Heh.

[info]rrrosa

May 3 2004, 22:22:27 UTC 8 years ago

I was just watching the Horsemen ep and thinking fondly of the cannibalism-that-I-didn't-recognize fic.

And I can't wait for your story to come out!!!

[info]kaiz

May 14 2004, 21:07:24 UTC 8 years ago

{{{Rosa}}} You are sooo sweet. :-)

[info]__tk__

September 30 2004, 05:34:16 UTC 7 years ago

:),

Already? *is going to keep a sharp eye out* I loved this. I was leery at first, but happy I read it. Severus/Kingsley forever! (sorry about that) Severus/Minerva forever...

[info]angharad04

December 20 2004, 03:11:18 UTC 7 years ago

That was beautifully done! Outstanding! :)

[info]kaiz

December 21 2004, 20:04:36 UTC 7 years ago

Thank you so much! I love the two of them together, whether just as friends or lovers. ♥.

[info]sine_que_non767

March 24 2005, 00:39:10 UTC 7 years ago

Really well-done. I *cannot* believe Snape/McG - wow, I've found a pairing I can't be converted to! - but rest assured, if I could see Snape as anything but profoundly gay, I'd believe it through this. :) Beautifully written, and a wonderfully ending.

[info]kaiz

March 24 2005, 19:58:13 UTC 7 years ago

Oh thank you! :-) SS/McG is one of my fave rarepairings! And yeah, Snape pings big time, doesn't he? But I can always justify it with, "He's gay with a Minerva exception clause" ;-)
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